Monday, June 8, 2015

To The Woods - Day 10 - June 8, 2015

No post from last Friday, we spent all day creating photo journals and weren't required to post anything. This morning, there was no field trip, and we spent the morning reading and writing a short story personifying something living. The short story we read as an example personified a field mouse, and the short story I wrote personified a pinyon tree. Here is my story:

Pinyons
By Jacob Penick

He is a tree which can survive in places no other trees could. His group of trees, a wide carpet of pinyons on the desert floor, stretches and fingers its way through the sharp, rocky top of the Colorado plateau before dropping off into the Grand Canyon. He is young, living for a mere 50 years on this earth while his neighbors around him grow near 250 years old. The pinyons are a quiet bunch, living in a peaceful solitude amongst one another. Being young, he grows tall and straight, reaching his thick needles out as far as he can in any direction. His surrounding, more ancient counterparts grow stout and twisted, constantly barraged with strong wind and wood-warping lightning. Lightning strikes really do a number on desert pinyons, twisting them beyond recognition, and he knew it was only a matter of time until he was struck.

It has been a while since the last desert rain, and although the desert pinyon is accustomed to a drier climate, he longs for a nice, cool rain. Rain is not common in his home, but when it does bless the parched ground, it falls fast and hard, eroding the soil away from him. This makes rooting troublesome for him and his neighbors, as the rain constantly moves soil away from their roots, exposing them to the environment. Pinyon Jays often visit him, plucking endlessly at his branches to gather the seeds he produces. Every fall, he drops cones full of seeds, spreading them out on the orange, rocky ground in hopes of producing new pinyons. Hope. This is his emotion. All he has is hope. Hope that the rain will come, hope that his seeds will be successful, hope that the lightning doesn’t warp his trunk, and hope that fires don’t take his life.

This afternoon is particularly dry. The hot sun blazing overhead makes him feel as if the drought will never end. The memories of the last rain are gone, and each tree struggles to pull nutrients from the dry air and sap them from the equally dry ground. He feels the distress of his ancient neighbors, but they have persevered through many droughts before and will likely survive this one too. He himself also worries. He worries that his beautiful teal needles will wither to a sad yellow, worries that the Pinyon Jays will not have any nuts to eat. He is a selfless creature, whether he is conscious of it or not, constantly producing food for the Jays. His hope for rain declines as his needles vainly test the dry air for any moisture. Night would soon fall, placing the harsh sun beneath the rocks and cooling the air. This was a constant comfort to the pinyons, knowing that a cool night always follows a horribly hot day.

The sky got darker than usual as evening fell, turning wonderful shades of blues and purples and even some greens. These colors could only mean clouds. Clouds out of the Southwest. He hoped the clouds would fall from the sky on his pinyon forest, drenching him, his neighbors, and the soil in a sweet night rain. The clouds grew taller as they rode the westerly wind, but he and his neighbors could hardly tell from the pitch blackness of the new-moon night that surrounded them. All they could see were the stars in the wide sky slowly disappearing as the clouds approached. They knew tall clouds meant rain, and with tall clouds and rain also came lightning. The stars directly overhead quietly disappeared, and the rain came. The rain violently streamed down, and for a moment, he and his neighbors basked in the wonderful wetness. His needles and branches grew heavy with moisture. For an instant, the sky was illuminated in white light as lightning found its way to the ground nearby.


He was unsure if any of his neighbors had been struck by the beautiful white light, but it didn’t matter, the rain had finally come, and he was going to enjoy it. But he couldn’t. The lightning had struck a neighbor of his, another young pinyon, permanently warping their trunk. This threw sparks in every direction. The rain had only been coming down for about a minute, so the sparks found a way to catch, spreading their fiery influence throughout the forest. He eventually noticed the orange glow nearby. If he could hear, he’d hear the crackling of wood as fire ripped through his neighbors. If he could smell, he’d smell the wonderfully sweet scent of burning pinyon. If he could taste, he’d taste the smoke and ash and constant waterfall from the sky. If he could feel, he’d feel the heat radiating from his burning brethren and the newly loosened soil between his roots. Before he knew it, he too was engulfed in flames. He knew this could happen. He feared the loss of his life for many, many years. He wanted to grow old like his neighbors, warped by the weather, having the wisdom only an ancient tree could have. He died slowly in irony amidst the pleasant rain and the painful fire. Some branches had a hard time catching due to the recent wetness, but they too inevitably went ablaze. Each teal needle burned, taking his pride away in a cloud of smoke. Hopefully from his remains would sprout a new pinyon, eager to grow and age like him. 

There is an accompanying image, but it won't load in for whatever reason. This is my last blog post, as I have to turn in my netbook like right now. 

To The Woods - Day 8 - June 4, 2015

There is something about canoeing that is more peaceful than just about anything else. Silently gliding over the smooth river that occasionally breaks into faster, shallower water brings about feelings of solitude and peace. Even more so are these feelings if you are canoeing alone. There isn't much to write about other than it was a good time, and it was really nice way to enjoy nature. I saw a beaver for the first time, carrying a stick through the water. At first, I thought it was just a floating stick, but it turned out there was a little beaver swimming beneath it. Unfortunately, I couldn't take any pictures because I kept my phone in a dry-bag The writing requirement for the day is to write  recipe poem about a body of water, and I chose to write about a river.

To make a river you need land and water. Allow the water to fall from a height, usually collecting at the top of the land. Watch as the water moves, forming a trough, the base of the river. A river is not just a trough with water. You need sediment to cloud it, organisms to inhabit it, and land animals to use it. Add to the water a dash of bacteria, a sprinkle of bugs, and a few cups of fish. Allow time for the organisms to develop and evolve. Toss in some sharp rocks to break up the surface of the water, agitating it. Over time, animals will come to feed and float on your river, and it will continue to develop. You need to do very little to create a river, as rivers occur naturally. Man I'm really not feeling this poem. 

Sorry for the short entry.

Thursday, June 4, 2015

To The Woods - Day 7 - June 3, 2015

Today we did vignettes. No field trip, just vignettes. We were taught a mini-lesson on vignettes that was fairly interesting. Vignettes are small passages of writing no more than 800 words long that evoke emotions and are usually written in the form of a poem, some sort of art, or a narrative using as many senses as possible. When writing a vignette, it is important to keep in mind that the purpose of your writing is to make the reader feel something. We followed five steps to create a vignette. The first step is to create a web of words stemming from one central word. The second step is to choose a focus or a main idea from this web. The third step is to find a picture of your focus or visualize it in your mind. The fourth step is to determine what medium of writing it will be written in and from what point of view. The final step is to draft and re-draft the vignette. We started by creating a practice vignette based on a provided picture. Here is what I came up with:


The picture we used for practice 

The web of words I came up with for this one 


I decided that my focus would be on the mountain, and that my piece would be a monologue with a poem-style arrangement from the point of view of the mountain. 

I stand tall over my kingdom.
Everything here is here because of me.
My hat of snow falls away,
tumbling past the treeline, bringing life to life.
The sun bathes my left side,
the shadows cool my right,
Regulating temperatures in my vibrant valley.
Even up here, the rich pine scent finds its way to me.
I peer upon the valley's boulders,
pieces of my own self brought away by the bubbling stream.
Other mountains surround me,
each with their own valley teeming with life.
Suddenly I am insignificant,
a lonely piece in an overwhelming puzzle, 
but I look at my valley and think.
Everything is here because of me.
I stand tall over my kingdom.
And I feel insignificant no more.

I went through all the same steps with the picture of a turtle I took at Cox as directed by the teachers. Here is what I came up with:


The turtle 

The web of words I came up with for this one


I decided that my focus would be on the ripples of water and that the piece would be a monologue from my point of view. 

I stand firmly upon this curved bridge 
scanning the dark water for life. 
I always seem to miss the wildlife around me,
so I feel I must find a turtle.
Soft ripples spread themselves out, glinting.
Sudden sunlight in my eyes.
I hear no animal movement, only ripples.
My eyes follow a set of ripples to their source.
Smells of wet sediment clog my nose
when Lo! A turtle has shown itself to me.
The source of the ripples
whose shell hardly contrasts the water
whose head rests gently on the surface 
floats easily among the pond flora. 

As you can see, my first poem is of much higher quality than the second poem. I think I found it so much easier to write the first poem because there was more going on in the subject picture, more to write about, more left to the imagination. With the turtle picture, there was nothing happening in the photo and I know exactly what was going on around me when I took it, leaving nothing to the imagination. To finish the day we watched a movie based off of a book, Never Cry Wolf. I loved the movie. It was about a dude who lived in the wilderness observing a family of wolves. The movie had a strong theme of nature presentation and was beautifully filmed and put together. It made me really want to visit the arctic circle. 



Wednesday, June 3, 2015

To The Woods - Day 6 - June 2, 2015

Kayaking day! I've been looking forward to kayaking for a while, and it finally happened today. The only downside was that it is June 2 and it was ridiculously cold outside. I dressed for summer (because it is summer) , when I really should have worn very warm clothes. It didn't help much that I got really wet when I was in my boat, so basically I accepted my fate of a frostbitten death which luckily never came. Anyway, the day started with an excerpt from Walden by H.D. Thoreau that used extremely detailed nature writing in the form of a reflective narrative, a prose I suppose (haha). He would write about observations and draw meaning from them using creative writing techniques like symbolism, personification, and metaphors. I kept the way Mr. Thoreau wrote this piece in mind throughout the day, as we did another hike through a small section of woods during which I made observations that I would draw meaning from while writing about the experience later.

When we arrived at Eastwood Metropark, we split into two groups. One group kayaked while the other group hiked and vice versa. My group hiked first, splitting up into three more groups, one group with each guide. The hike was quite small, only about half a mile or so long, but it took a long time as we often stopped to listen to birds or talk about wildlife in the immediate area. The section of trail we walked on is part of both the Buckeye Trail and the North Country trail, two long-distance backpacking trails. This very small portion of trail lay nestled between a small hill and the Mad River, unfortunately not very far removed from the wide open grassy sports fields of Eastwood Metropark. Walking down the set of dirt and wood stairs at the start of the trail, I recall the time I rode my bike on this trail, whizzing past all the beautiful plants and river scenes without giving them a second thought. This time, however, I was slowly walking, so I had time to observe all the bugs, plants, and animals I could. I found myself fascinated by the high concentration of sycamore trees in the area. These trees are beautiful with bark-less white and grey tops and bright green leaves. Our guide spent most of the time talking about the birds flying above and the sounds they made, which I didn't really find as interesting as the trees and bugs hanging out around me. One thing I learned about birds is that chimney swifts, the very common black-colored bird you see flying around all the time, need dead trees to live, so cutting down dead trees isn't really a good idea. We focused heavily on invasive plants. When in the woods, you can easily identify an invasive plant by seeing if its leaves are being eaten or not. If they are, then the plant is most likely native. We also learned how to identify poison ivy more easily by looking for the opposite mitten shape on the outer two leaves of three leaf groups. As we made our way back to the lunch area, we came across groves of hemlock and wild strawberries. Apparently, these strawberries are invasive, but they aren't really harming anything. I ate one. I guess it was ok.


Beavers seem to have worked on this tree a bit. Noticed this when we stopped to talk abut some birds. 

Small patch of wild strawberries


After hiking and eating lunch, it was finally time to get in a boat. The instructor gave a quick crash-course in life jacket safety and paddle-handling before turning us loose to paddle around. I had gone through a couple levels of a kayaking class with the same guy before, and I thank my lucky stars that he didn't recognize me. Because of my prior experience, it didn't take me long to get my bearings in the boat. I was pretty good at taking really tight turns and gaining speed. We followed the instructors on a route around islands in this little lake. The water here was so calm. It wasn't very clear or pretty, but if you could get ahead of the mass of high school kids in boats you could appreciate how calm and smooth the surface of the lake was.


A little away from the group I could enjoy the calmness

Kayaking 

More kayaking


After getting back to the school, we were tasked with writing something like what H.D. Thoreau wrote in that passage from Walden using observations (all five senses, of course) and trying to get meaning from them. I had a little more trouble connecting with nature today than I had at Aulwood or Cox, but I'll give it a shot anyway: (I'm doing it in the form of a reflection)

I can remember the green surface of the water, a wide floor of stained glass with islands in the center and bridges overhead. Dipping my fingers in the glass, I hardly felt water; no, it was too light to be water. It must have been a thicker version of the air around me, freezing the skin near my fingernails. My nose was stuffy, so my mouth hung open. The wind constantly smothered my face as I paddled along, drying my mouth, leaving a stale, hard taste. This may have been a freshwater lake, but the salty smell of sediment being stirred by the water constantly drills holes in my nostrils. Coming back onto land, the line of kayaks bumps against the docks, thump thump thump, a giant made of hollow plastic meandering along a wooden boardwalk.

I feel like this writing piece isn't the best that I could do, hopefully tomorrow whatever we do I'll be able to tackle the task a little bit better. 


Tuesday, June 2, 2015

To The Woods - Day 5 - June 1, 2015

No field trip today on Day 5, but I spent the entire morning daydreaming and planning for a trip. We began the day by watching videos and readings from a book called Wild (which has recently been turned into a movie). Wild is about a woman's time spent on the Pacific Crest Trail (PCT) and how she overcame her challenges, both inside and outside of hiking. One major struggle she had with her hike was her pack weight (70 lbs.!!). She used the pack weight as a metaphor for the daily struggles she encountered and had to live with from drug use to divorced to the death of her mom. Eventually, she picked it up and carried it regardless of the weight, just like the stuff she had to deal with on a daily basis. This hike changed this woman's life, helping her to focus on what's important. After finishing the hike, she remarried and is currently a mother of two and extremely happy with her life. One long hike can change so much.

This actually isn't the first time I've heard of the PCT. In the summer of 2010 or something I skipped out on a trip to the water park to watch and re-watch a National Geographic documentary on thru-hiking the PCT. Watching these people hike in such an amazing place for more than 2,500 miles inspired me to do just that. I still hope to hike it some day, and this activity was a nice reminder of that personal goal. The only problem is that it takes many months and needs to be timed just right in order to thru-hike the PCT, so I can't really be in school or involved with a job when (if) I do it. Since seeing the documentary when I was younger, I've always wanted to hike it just for the beautiful scenery and the removal from society, but the woman in Wild made an interesting point. She said that there are two kinds of people that hike the PCT; those who do it just because they can and to enjoy nature (my reason), and those that are looking for change in their lives. No matter which type of person you are, you will experience change in your life and you will feel more connected to nature.

We did an activity based off of packing for a hike like this. The woman from Wild's pack, Monster, weighed about 70 pounds and was ridiculously over-packed. The average pack weight for backpackers is somewhere around 20 or 25 pounds. Our task was to develop a list of supplies that we would take on a large backpacking trip while recording the weights of each item. This amount of supplies had to be suitable for however long we would be on the trail. This is my list:

I am going to be hiking the Colorado Trail from Denver to Durango starting in mid-Summer for 486 miles, taking 5 weeks to thru-hike it at about 14 miles/day.





Anything marked with a star can be discarded mid-trip, weather permitting. My total pack weight, including water, fuel, and daily food is exactly 30 pounds, a little heavier than the preferred weight of about 25 pounds. This research took a lot of time, in fact I had to work on it a little at home, as I researched each product and compared it to its competitors based on weight and functionality with no regard to price. In fact, the Hummingbird sleeping bag costs more than my pack and my tent combined, which is a little ridiculous. Obviously, if I were to actually plan a pack like this, the weight would be a little heavier as I would spend so much money trying to save weight. The rest of the day was spent doing yoga and watching Fly Away Home, a movie about a young girl helping geese to migrate for the first time by flying a light aircraft shaped like a goose. That itself sounds like a drug trip, but the movie was pretty good, heartwarming even. I look forward to visiting Eastwood Metropark tomorrow to gather some material for nature writing.